Cold today by ice from the skyBold traveling flakes grow into mountainsHot as this long love that uses the snow to find beautyHow I long for my loveDo all snowflakes have partners making the long journey to Earth togetherOr do they wander the sky yearning to find a love to keep them warm
From the Listener's Book Club:
ReplyDeleteJack M-Nice job
Aiden-I loved it
Kate-Good descriptions for snow
Sasha-What a healing, meaningful poem!
Brynn-From winter skies a story of love. Beautiful
Aulton-I find the majesty in snowflakes to reflect unique love, they are all looking for someone to love. Beautiful poem
Fox-Thomas I love the way your poem asks questions, totally great idea.
Coco-You are such a romantic Thomas! Being happy in love is one of my life goals
Ruhi-Love filled poem
Miller-Thomas, I think you will find love. Snowflakes are incredible and so are you. Super beautiful poem. I love it
Kian-Beautiful
Arth-Stunning poem, Thomas. So meaningful and deep
Pablo-I like this kind of wondering. It wakes my imagination
Devon-Makes me wonder about nature having thoughts
Jack H-Really beautiful
Kaavish-Makes me really happy