Need story notes, brain is fried
Neurotic stray ideas have dried
Should it be a love glow?
Should it be a death blow?
Can you put a twist?
Can you hide a tryst?
Will it happen in a manor?
Will it play in a banner?
Does our curse lives on tomorrow?
Does the girl have time to borrow?
What seeds rise from the fire?
What races survive the mire?
When will the story end?
Before it begins or when I hit send?
From Your Book Club Friends:
ReplyDeleteAiden-Love it, Ruhi
Aulton-questions to ponder. Love it!
Brielle-Ruhi, what marvelous ponderings!
Miller-I love this poem, Ruhi! So intriguing
Brynn-Thought provoking couplets
Sasha-I enjoy your wise, hallucinating learning, my friend.
Jack M-well done
Thomas-Really great
Nadia-Relate! I liked the line "What seeds rise from the fire?"
Devon-I want to ask what you mean in this poem? I love that it's so interesting. Happy to ponder your questions
Jack-Lovely
Luke-very rhythmic!