The quiet storefronts almost upset me
Buried relics of the past
Dinosaurs among Amazon’s kingdom
We verify their existence on Google Maps
Buried relics of the past
Now memorialized forever —
they still exist in Google Maps —
moments frozen in the past
Now memorialized forever,
life always advances around
moments frozen in the past,
and the quiet storefronts almost upset me
This is interesting. I like "Amazon's Kingdom" metaphor.
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ReplyDeleteBrielle-Aiden, so well done my friend
Pablo-Love the poem and love google maps
Brynn-Beautiful and haunting
Thomas-So cool!
Devon-Aiden that poem is awesome
Jack M-Well done
Nina-I love the rhythm of this poem, great job Aiden
Miller-It is so neat to sit and think about this incredible poem
Moritz-I think it's awesome. Hope to be a writer one day too
Jackson-Great poem friend. Like the repeated lines
Matthew-Love the poem
Kate-What a cool poemAiden!