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Thursday, December 5, 2024

Dusky Feeling by Ruhi Khanna

 


Close the door
Cross the floor

Map the room 
Hone the broom

Water the flowers 
Plan the shower

Study the sky 
bring the sly

Create the dream
Please the team

Sing the song
Tune the prong

Cherish the day 
Trust the play

Gone is the clock
Restock your thoughts

Sun comes to inspire
Start new desires

Lose the dusky feeling
Embrace the clean living

1 comment:

  1. From The Listener's Book Club

    Nadia-Sense of time ticking in pure cadence
    Brynn-I love the fun couplets
    Aulton-I can picture much of this. It's very calm. I think the structure suits the them
    Brielle-How nice! It's kindly optimistic
    Aiden-Magnificent
    Kate-Very good and so much fun
    Miller-I'm into the short, sweet lines. Love this awesome poem
    Sasha-Fun rhyming, words shining
    Pablo-Think the couplets make for a feeling of new starts. I like it
    Arth-Like your poem style and the lasting hope
    Brendan-Ruhi, like your poem
    Brielle-Cheer in the air/Kindness everywhere

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