Close the doorCross the floorMap the roomHone the broomWater the flowersPlan the showerStudy the skybring the slyCreate the dreamPlease the teamSing the songTune the prongCherish the dayTrust the playGone is the clockRestock your thoughtsSun comes to inspireStart new desiresLose the dusky feelingEmbrace the clean living
From The Listener's Book Club
ReplyDeleteNadia-Sense of time ticking in pure cadence
Brynn-I love the fun couplets
Aulton-I can picture much of this. It's very calm. I think the structure suits the them
Brielle-How nice! It's kindly optimistic
Aiden-Magnificent
Kate-Very good and so much fun
Miller-I'm into the short, sweet lines. Love this awesome poem
Sasha-Fun rhyming, words shining
Pablo-Think the couplets make for a feeling of new starts. I like it
Arth-Like your poem style and the lasting hope
Brendan-Ruhi, like your poem
Brielle-Cheer in the air/Kindness everywhere