by Ruhi Khanna
I find the game of love,
Less then any accomplishment,
I find the appeal of love,
Calling some to abandon hope.
I find the reign of pure time,
Negative to hilly rocky roads,
I find the stillness of haste,
Makes the cage tighter.
I find the withered roses,
Say the tale of rancid games,
I find the leaning of mind,
Tames the adventure spirit.
I find the kindness of expression
Elevates the humble heart,
I find the lasting noise,
Fills me with gratitude.
What, Ruhi excellent thoughts expressed.
ReplyDeleteKeep it up, will wait for next.
Goodone
ReplyDeleteVery good Ruhi
ReplyDeleteRuhi u are truly Awesome. Your flight of thoughts so explicitly expressed has us surprised each time. Keep it up as we wait for more. Love u. Dadi.
ReplyDeleteWow Ruhi, So much of depth and clear expression, at such young age! You surprise me every time! keep writing and keep sharing. lots of love. Renu Aunty
ReplyDeleteFrom the Listeners Book Club
ReplyDeleteBrielle-Sound of repeated words makes me think of a drum
Kian-Lyrical and repetitive
Emma-A beautiful poem and spacing is consistent
Miller-It is rhythmic in the most soothing way
Brynn-I love the repetition and the rhythm
Aulton-Ruhi, fond of your structure of similar length lines. The rhythm
is so balanced due to this feature
Sasha-Beautiful! I hear the rhythm and happy and sad moods at the same time
Jack-Nice poem
Philip-The repeated phrase I find gives rhythm to the poem
Thomas-Beautiful, Ruhi
Matthew-I like the repetition of "I find" to start each stanza and the verb to start the last line of each stanza
Pablo-Rhythm is nice. Repeating "I find" makes it have a nice sound
Stacylee-Ruhi writes really interesting. Unexpected words and sad.
Jackson-I notice there might be a lot of fours sentences begin with I find
Arth-Lyrical and terrific, Ruhi